May's Come Lately. Poem by Fay Slimm

May's Come Lately.

Rating: 5.0


Dancing with greenest
Of fresh-leaved dress,
The trees have awakened
Come lately, - - - shook
Down their winter-drab,
Roots loosened, new tresses
Bob lightly in warm spring.
This year Maytime took
Longer to show, but she's
Come, - - - floating white
Train trailing her blossoms.
Each hedgerow ablaze
With petaling snow - - -
Faintly scented, - - - alight
And glowing, - - May's bridal
Show is - - amazing.
What more cause for delight
Than, - - - come lately
Another revival
To which we relate?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Jarvis 24 April 2009

Picturesque, vibrant and sunny - this fresh and lively poem leaves the reader's heart crammed with the sights and scents of Spring. S :)

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Fiona Davidson 24 April 2009

Beautiful vivid write Fay...I think nature is rapidly becoming your best theme...this is wonderful...Fi 10++++

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Stephen Stirk 24 April 2009

Lovely seasonal poem Fay, very much enjoyed. Descriptive and full of wonderment Steve

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Such a celebration of flowing welcoming imagery for May's late arrival. The first two lines danced with me to find blossoms, petaling snow, a bridle show and so much more. How you made my heart sing with happiness Fay. Top marks! Karin Anderson

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Juneil Sechico 27 April 2009

Very Fresh Fay! Nice flow of words......love the tempo and imageries...! 10+

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Rani Turton 03 May 2009

Lovely poem about renewal that is bright and aerien.

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Tom Balch 01 May 2009

This is a lovely piece about May, well penned Fay, regards Tom

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Delicate Heart 01 May 2009

very nice poem, written eloquently.you become lost whilst in reading

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Meggie Gultiano 28 April 2009

this is a very pleasant write and a pleasure to read

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Sameer Ahmed 27 April 2009

Wow! Very artfully portrayed the Incoming May though late but still feels pleasant. The ecology seems to have uplifted itself enchanting the surroundings.....10/10

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