May I Have Unconditional Love With You. By Ray Subrata Poem by Subrata Ray

May I Have Unconditional Love With You. By Ray Subrata

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The Beauty blazer buzzes,
She spreads her eye to the brim,
And walls me with her vigilance,
An ever attention she urges,
For she wishes to set a bridge.

Unspoken conditions erect heads,
As parasite round a tender plant,
The secret sacred wishes a grant.

My wild senses, seek relief,
Like an unbridled sea horse,
But she be the Neptune tames me,
And I lose all my power to cross.

If I were she, and she be me,
Then had I had not the same hang,
For a secured boat with notified rank,
The unwritten treaty of each other’s realm!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Full of depth and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Subrata Ray

Subrata Ray

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