May I Drink Your Tears? Poem by Ray Quesada

May I Drink Your Tears?

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May i eat your laughter

and drink your tears?

and then after

that may i sweetly speak

my words, the rich and the bleak,

into your ear?

brush your locks

of hair aside,

and I'd

even take my foolish pride

and hide

it under a rock

outside,

so that in your soul i may reside.

I am a box that's locked...

but you have pried me open

-5: 49 - 5: 54 p.m.; 11-28-2012-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owain Glyn 01 December 2012

Sometimes, a few words say more than volumes, you've achieved that here.

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Red O'mara 01 December 2012

Yes, Ray. You've come back better than ever.

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Maggie Munro 30 November 2012

The intimacy of sharing good and bad times, beautifully conveyed

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