Mausoleum Poem by Saniya Galeyeva

Mausoleum

Rating: 5.0


For you our love was neither strong nor real,
But I had both wild fears and odd hopes.
And now in my soul there's a mausoleum,
It's a remembrance of the joy we lost.

How can I bury all those golden feelings
That you woke up in my heart? Though they died
It seems as if they were alive and breathing.
How can I write them off? I do not understand.

There is a cold and gloomy mausoleum
That is inside of me and that is simply me.
Let people call me stubborn, odd or silly -
For me your fake love oath was like a wedding ring.

Monday, August 6, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love,love,love and dreams,love and life,sad,sad love,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 July 2013

How u employ and draw the analogy of d mausoleum is superb! So cheer up pal! Leave sadnes to poetry alone. Hope u read mine too.

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Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan 28 September 2012

Are you sure that's not a suicidal mission you are taking in the expedition of love? Never mind a good write. I want the dance of your pen to blaze with the fire of passion. Great one

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Superb write and great metaphors and anastrophes used in the poem.I liked the theme very much.Not very easy topic to write for all.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 August 2012

For me your fake love oath was like a wedding ring.passionately poignant, heart ripping,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Saniya Galeyeva

Saniya Galeyeva

Russia, Orenburg region, Sorochinsk
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