Diane Hine

Silver Star - 4,115 Points (25 July 1956)

Mathematical Star Signs - Poem by Diane Hine

A Mass of Aries rams describes a Curl
Potentially connected to a Field
Some Fractal of Mechanics may unfurl
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Comments about Mathematical Star Signs by Diane Hine

  • Susan Williams Susan Williams (3/25/2016 11:40:00 PM)

    Congratulations on Poem of the Day. This was an intriguing piece of writing (Report) Reply

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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (3/25/2016 11:23:00 PM)

    Heartiest Congratulations on Poem od the Day as also superb imagery that has envisioned such a brilliant piece. (Report) Reply

  • Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (3/25/2016 10:15:00 AM)

    Though poem is found to be tough to understand I liked the rhyme and word power it gives. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (3/25/2016 10:07:00 AM)

    The poet seems to have an amazing knowledge of astrology but what attracts the attention of an avid reader of poetry is its rhyme, narrative and great poetic beauty. Thanks, Diane. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (3/25/2016 9:36:00 AM)

    This is a masterpiece, Diane. Your intelligence is certainly showing here. My favorite verse is this one:
    Most Geminis are tied in Causal Loop
    Because their brains are Hypobolic Plot
    So if you Add their salad to their soup
    It anti-matters them and matters not.
    Congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Akachukwu Lekwauwa Akachukwu Lekwauwa (3/25/2016 4:33:00 AM)

    their is no sphere which poetry cannot reach. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (3/25/2016 4:23:00 AM)

    Eye-spy! ! Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (3/25/2016 1:54:00 AM)

    Congrats, Diane. As mentioned below, great poem (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (3/15/2016 8:04:00 AM)

    Verily , you seem to possess a good knowledge of the zodiac and numerology , I too possess it and in my early youth I was mad after it but later I realised that faith in God is the greatest of all. Loved reading and commenting (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (2/15/2016 9:36:00 AM)

    Logic! ! With the ways of nature. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Howard Savage (1/21/2016 10:08:00 AM)

    This is a profound poem, I am still trying to comprehend all of the symbols and metaphors. (Report) Reply

  • Maria Gonzalez (8/1/2015 10:37:00 AM)

    Love this poem. A wonderful poetic write on the zodiac and the signs temperaments. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George Valsa George (6/4/2015 6:45:00 AM)

    Your scientific and astronomical analysis of people under the different zodiac signs is just wonderful..... Though you have added little fiction and little humour, the mathematical validity of the poem cannot be questioned. I fall under Gemini and I like the stanza on Geminians the most....

    'Most Geminis are tied in Causal Loop
    Because their brains are Hypobolic Plot
    So if you Add their salad to their soup
    It anti-matters them and matters not'. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (4/25/2015 8:51:00 PM)

    Some of the critics (below) obviously don't understand and so cannot appreciate the knowledge and intelligence required to write a piece of this depth. Though hardly a mathematician, I am a scientist, philosopher and astronomer at heart and in study, and a wannabe poet. This is going to my favorites. Thanks, Diane (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (3/20/2015 1:21:00 AM)

    Though, I do not have much interest in astrology or the zodiac signs (or maths) , I enjoyed the poem for its authentic content and pleasure it offers to true lover of poetry. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • James Fitzpatrick (1/2/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    Well done in your research Diane I'm sure it took a lot out of you. Less rhyme more rhythm and your poetry could take off, the volume of work will be less too. Well done (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (10/29/2014 10:34:00 AM)

    A Brilliant mathematical calculations on each stars signs.
    A wonderful touch of mathematics, science, and history of prediction by astrologers, give this poem a glowing touch to all stars.
    Above all the the superb vocabulary gives an everlasting touch.

    Beautiful Message cannot be ignored...
    Very true said, one should avoid empty prophecies, which can confine man in the bonds of Hell. Especially if prediction goes wrong, it can mentally disturb a person.

    Beautiful mathematical calculation on each stars. Let's enjoy each stars taking each of its characteristics lightly.
    Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

    Congrats! Well deserved poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Roseann Shawiak (10/1/2014 5:26:00 PM)

    Diane, I love how you utilized mathematics with astrology, great vocabulary too! Fantastic write. Many of my poems incorporate math, physics, etc. - I enjoy math and formulas, chemistry etc., so this poem gave me great pleasure in reading it! Thank you very much for sharing it. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick Daniel Brick (8/10/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    I'm just finishing writing a poem called SEVEN WINDOWS I'll post in a few days. I needed the name for a character you could call a villain and the name AUGUSTINE popped into my head. I once read his writings with the faith of a believer; now I see theologians like him as part of the problem. His condemnation of mathematicians (astrologers) is a case in point. Isn't God supposed to be the Judge of men? - BTW This is another perfected pitched poem. I love the flow of words and attitude. (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (3/26/2014 2:02:00 PM)

    ....an amazing and brilliant write...and I must ask is our destiny written in the stars...enjoyed this masterpiece... (Report) Reply










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