Diane Hine

Silver Star - 4,107 Points (25 July 1956)

Mathematical Star Signs - Poem by Diane Hine

A Mass of Aries rams describes a Curl
Potentially connected to a Field
Some Fractal of Mechanics may unfurl
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Comments about Mathematical Star Signs by Diane Hine

  • Rookie - 302 Points Tiger Lily (6/22/2015 4:58:00 PM)

    ..well then I'm going straight to hell! I enjoyed this so much! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 25,150 Points Valsa George (6/4/2015 6:45:00 AM)

    Your scientific and astronomical analysis of people under the different zodiac signs is just wonderful..... Though you have added little fiction and little humour, the mathematical validity of the poem cannot be questioned. I fall under Gemini and I like the stanza on Geminians the most....

    'Most Geminis are tied in Causal Loop
    Because their brains are Hypobolic Plot
    So if you Add their salad to their soup
    It anti-matters them and matters not'. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,531 Points Kelly Kurt (4/25/2015 8:51:00 PM)

    Some of the critics (below) obviously don't understand and so cannot appreciate the knowledge and intelligence required to write a piece of this depth. Though hardly a mathematician, I am a scientist, philosopher and astronomer at heart and in study, and a wannabe poet. This is going to my favorites. Thanks, Diane (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,750 Points Rajnish Manga (3/20/2015 1:21:00 AM)

    Though, I do not have much interest in astrology or the zodiac signs (or maths) , I enjoyed the poem for its authentic content and pleasure it offers to true lover of poetry. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 554 Points James Fitzpatrick (1/2/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    Well done in your research Diane I'm sure it took a lot out of you. Less rhyme more rhythm and your poetry could take off, the volume of work will be less too. Well done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (10/29/2014 10:34:00 AM)

    A Brilliant mathematical calculations on each stars signs.
    A wonderful touch of mathematics, science, and history of prediction by astrologers, give this poem a glowing touch to all stars.
    Above all the the superb vocabulary gives an everlasting touch.

    Beautiful Message cannot be ignored...
    Very true said, one should avoid empty prophecies, which can confine man in the bonds of Hell. Especially if prediction goes wrong, it can mentally disturb a person.

    Beautiful mathematical calculation on each stars. Let's enjoy each stars taking each of its characteristics lightly.
    Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

    Congrats! Well deserved poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,989 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/1/2014 5:26:00 PM)

    Diane, I love how you utilized mathematics with astrology, great vocabulary too! Fantastic write. Many of my poems incorporate math, physics, etc. - I enjoy math and formulas, chemistry etc., so this poem gave me great pleasure in reading it! Thank you very much for sharing it. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,839 Points Daniel Brick (8/10/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    I'm just finishing writing a poem called SEVEN WINDOWS I'll post in a few days. I needed the name for a character you could call a villain and the name AUGUSTINE popped into my head. I once read his writings with the faith of a believer; now I see theologians like him as part of the problem. His condemnation of mathematicians (astrologers) is a case in point. Isn't God supposed to be the Judge of men? - BTW This is another perfected pitched poem. I love the flow of words and attitude. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,919 Points * Sunprincess * (3/26/2014 2:02:00 PM)

    ....an amazing and brilliant write...and I must ask is our destiny written in the stars...enjoyed this masterpiece... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 594 Points Stephen W (3/20/2014 9:22:00 PM)

    You're not a mathematician by any chance? : -) Very entertaining, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,297 Points Lyn Paul (3/20/2014 7:25:00 PM)

    Only a mathematical genius could piece these incredible words together. Original and this really displays your talent Diane. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,431 Points Ramesh Rai (3/20/2014 11:54:00 AM)

    As Sagittarians Abstractly run
    On no Account engage in Matrix
    dance
    Whilst they may find it Exponential
    fun
    You'll forfeit toes to their Kinetic
    prance.
    I like to add this poem. Thnx for share. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 177 Points Richard Lackman (3/20/2014 10:38:00 AM)

    Diane,
    What a great poem! Not an easy one to write. Your vocabulery in the poem is so diverse. Quite an achievement tomake it akk fit within your meter and rhyme.
    Dick Lackman (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,308 Points K.c. Ford (3/20/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    Excellent subject choice but failed for lack of simplicity. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/18/2013 8:17:00 AM)

    I like the first stanza as it applies to me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 352 Points Captain Cur (3/20/2013 2:50:00 PM)

    Existentially a paranormal perfect work
    full of whim and interplanetary talk.
    Loved your rendition of the twelve signs.
    Of course, I was born under the thirteenth. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,022 Points Leslie Philibert (3/20/2013 4:15:00 AM)

    I like this, but I think some of thre rhymes are very forced, with simplicity you could have got the message across (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 65 Points Doug Bentley (3/21/2012 7:10:00 PM)

    congratulations!
    for welcoming all of us
    to the dawning of the age of aquarius.
    you're on my favorites list. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points J.b. Lebuert (3/20/2012 7:06:00 PM)

    You truly have a better mind than most - and have raised the poetry bar with this gem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Neil Crawford (3/19/2012 2:32:00 PM)

    Wow - very clever and very amusing. (Report) Reply










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