Mask Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Mask

Rating: 5.0


The robbers wear stocking cloak
The kids wear animal mask

We mask our vice with a smile
Our ignorance no one can bask

(2008/10/17)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 17 October 2008

Sometimes its hard to see beyond a smile, excellent as always, 10 Lynda xx

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Neil Marsden 17 October 2008

Very deep and meaningful pieceof writing, benefits from reading aloud! Nice work. Neil.

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yes very true everyone wears the mask of themselves deep within

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Thad Wilk 17 October 2008

Another brilliant gem of a poem, very true words - thank you for sharing! ! Best wishes! *10* Friend Thad

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Annie Girl 17 October 2008

some wear a mask to hide their ture selfs and others just wear masks to have fun. bnice keep it up

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 October 2008

Yes ignorance, very true. Love with 10.

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Lindsey Ashton 23 October 2008

very good and is sometimes true for all of us

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Triin Kann 22 October 2008

You're so right. This is another great poem of yours. A 10 from me.

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A ten from me and so true to human nature.can we ever really be true to ourselves.

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Chitra - 19 October 2008

true words, meaningful write these lines definitelty un-mask the wisdom lying beneath the mortal frame

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