Marriage Poem by Praveen Kumar in Celestial Glow

Marriage

Rating: 5.0


Marriage is a long and blind bridge
Of only hopes and nothing more;
Marriage is climbing a messy ridge,
Filled in smoke, for its fresh air.

Marriage is a field of ego fights,
Feuds and clashes for own rights,
Milk of love going terribly sour,
Ennui brooding in stifling air.

Marriage is pull in diverse sides
Unless both pull on agreement;
It's building life, joining hands,
No romances there really count.

It's cooperation and coordination,
An alliance for the common cause;
When minds meet not, brings disruption,
Clashes ensue, and crumbles the base.

Marriage needs refrain, more restraint,
And calls for the glue of commitment;
Sharing together wilderness in sail
Brings them together on life's rail.

In craze for freedom and self's hedge,
Marriage is sheer a huge disaster;
Then, marriage is a long and blind bridge
Of only hopes and nothing more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 April 2016

Marriage is pull in diverse sides Unless both pull on agreement; It's building life, joining hands, No romances there really count. It's cooperation and coordination, An alliance for the common cause; When minds meet not, brings disruption, Clashes ensue, and crumbles the base. Nicely composed poem... Delivering brilliant tips essential for conjugal life. Thanks for the beautiful poem.10 for it. Subhas.

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Rajnish Manga 25 April 2016

You have touched upon both sides of the coin named marriage. There is a need for mutual understanding, accommodation and love to cement the bond between the partners. Thanks. Marriage needs refrain, more restraint, And calls for the glue of commitment;

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