Many Takers Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Many Takers

Rating: 5.0


Try for real
You may feel
Heart like steel
In custody still

Yes feel sentiments
With lots of moments
That may make you smile
But keep them in secret file

Love has to be kind
And at the same time mild too
Love can't turn cruel
To make you unwell

It can absorb shocks
Even if run out of stock
That is beauty of heart
Natural and lovely divine art

You can turn fierce
When feel remorse!
About pain of others
It has many takers

Saturday, November 1, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2014

Try for real You may feel Heart like steel In custody still

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2014

San Palad likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2014

welcome Spring Pitts, Just now · Unlike · 1 50 minutes

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2014

welcome Maithili Roy, Shamenaz Shaikh, Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2014

welcome Chandni Ahmed Just now · Unlike · 1

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 01 November 2014

Hello poet friend Hasmukh. I see a new poem for a new month. I enjoyed, Loyd PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support.

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Saheb Mohapatra 01 November 2014

great way of expressing love..........the last stanza is tremendous and has a very strong impact on the readers........good poem..........10...............thanks for submitting it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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