Manna Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Manna

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In this earth many creatures do live in,
In mind some are weak and some are keen.
Some live in water and some on soil,
Man is social animal and has to toil. [1]

Either animals or insects or human being,
Bear some good qualities with them seeing.
They get manna when they fall in trouble,
God does help them there isn't rumble. [2]

Once a small mouse does help a lion,
Lion falling in danger gets manna and Zion.
Due to his previous mercy on little mouse,
God saves lion's life which is to douse. [3]

In human beings some people save nature,
God provides them manna and also nurture.
Some have sympathy and help to other,
In danger they get manna don't bother. [4]
It is sure for a person to get manna,
He has if love, kindness to fauna.
People to people serving help is great,
Gods help them always never does late. [5]

Let's be good to others and help them
Let be kind in bringing peace and fem.
Let's work hand to hand in right path,
God will provide manna peace on Earth. [6]

Sunday, October 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Manna means something unexpected and delightful benefit or help or food miraculously provided by God. A virtuous person having helpful nature will get manna. This truth has been narrated in this poem. In this Earth many types of creatures do live in. Among them man is a social animal who has to toil. Either human beings or animals that are virtuous and helpful get manna in the time of danger or trouble. We know how a mouse escapes from a lion in lion's mercy. The mouse helps the lion and save his life. Both they get manna due to their helping nature. People, who save nature, help others get manna. It is sure that a person having righteous qualities who always helps to all creatures gets manna. So, we should be kind to others and help them in time of need. We should work together in right path and avoid nonviolence in which God will provide us manna. This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. It is written on this day of 12th October,2014 in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Manna - Substance miraculously provided by God as food/something unexpected and delightful benefit or help
Toil - hard labour
Seeing - discern mentally/understand
Zion - the kingdom of heaven
Douse - extinguish
Fauna - all the animal life in a particular region
Rumble - fight between rival gangs of adolescents
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Md Asadullah 12 October 2014

Ameen, Wonderful prayer. you ended the poem with beautiful last paragraph: - - Let's be good to others and help them Let be kind in bringing peace and fem. Let's work hand to hand in right path, God will provide manna peace on Earth

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Akhtar Jawad 12 October 2014

Let's be good to others and help them Let be kind in bringing peace and fem. Let's work hand to hand in right path, God will provide manna peace on Earth. [6] An universal message, a lovely poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2019

(2) .......Most appreciated, Sir. You are the Manna on PH, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. Truly, I mean that. Manna the word to always remember.It´s all there is: God´s Bliss. Thank you for the Manna, Sir. A myriad of 10´s. I remember Jesus with His disciples and the manna. Wondrous beautifully presented.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 January 2019

WOW! This is a poem created on Sunday the 12th of October 2014. I was already here on the 13th of December 2011, but never active until the year of 2017. MANNA, a word that I know too well, but it´s perfectly stated here and good for us all to read this precious document-poem about Manna and for me to read as well.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 November 2018

In human beings some people save nature, God provides them manna and also nurture. //// great writing with pure faith on GOD

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Allemagne Roßmann 24 October 2014

Great write Sir.Lot to learn from you.

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Paul Sebastian 17 October 2014

A beautiful rhyming poem on how man will be blessed when he takes the route to help others and obey God's law. Words give images and you have cleverly weaved them to give a vivid picture. I particularly liked the last conclusive stanza. Great, you chose to use 'manna' to remind man of what once happened in the desert when they complained - 'rumbled' - and grumbled for food. Great write. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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