Making Me Feel The Pain Of Waiting. Poem by Dev Anand
Making Me Feel The Pain Of Waiting.
She was walking on the other shore.
My heart wanted to run to her
on the other beautiful shore.
But I controlled myself and sat
under this tree full of flowers.
It was such a desire and wished
that she runs up to me on this shore.
But she came slowly,
purposely slowly,
making me feel the pain of waiting.
You captured beautifully '' the game of love '' in your poem - pain and pleasure always mingle, when hearts are in love!
purposely slowly, - don't understand such tricks women like to make. but they are like this.
You capture the pain of waiting beautifully. A lovely romantic write.
The pain of waiting for loved ones is not bitter..though impatience is filling in mind one can eagerly wait for his/ hers love for hours and hours... Nice penning....10/10
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Romance need a women also needs many things. Have a nice day.10+++++++++++++++
Dear Poet Dev, It is worthy to wait for someone who truly cares and is willing to be waited...(hehehe) .. Nice poem...I feel the anxiety and discomfort while waiting.... Sincerely, diane
My heart wanted to run to her.... expressing the feelings of a one who loves..Good Poem
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/17/2024 10:04:53 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Making me feel the pain of waiting, Oh dear Poet, you know there is a pleasure in wating, it is even thrilling, the intencity matters how deep you love the other, and how important he or she is.