Poetheart Morgan

Rookie - 323 Points (05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

Making Glass! - Poem by Poetheart Morgan

The flame
Was more than a blaze
More than hot
Fervent ~ lascivious ~


The glass
Taking form
From my pulse
No-form
Cutting and chipping

Voices in the background
Deep eyes
Evoking applause

How many can do that


Bring the color to the white
The Spectrum
That rest at least
Alone


Comments about Making Glass! by Poetheart Morgan

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (6/30/2013 2:49:00 PM)

    nice take on glass making. a good read (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (6/8/2013 6:20:00 AM)

    Making glass requires heat and sand. Relationships require heat and hope to turn into love. A lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 204 Points Stan Petrovich (6/5/2013 1:57:00 AM)

    I see profundity here that really ranks with TS Eliot! Thanks, Mirna.~your friend Stan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,802 Points Sekharan Pookkat (6/3/2013 10:32:00 AM)

    A poem is formed in poets mind after several additions, subtractions and divisions with words.your narration gives clear images of relationships which you prefer most. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (6/2/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    It takes flame (heat) to make glass, and sand (pulse) and the formless glass a relationship that flows through your veins like broken shards of glass. Voices in the background are the words of advise from someone looking deep into your soul, your words, hence the applause.
    Bring color to the white evokes images of poems written that can stand the test ot time
    and stand alone on their own. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 4, 2013


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