Making A Day. Poem by Fay Slimm

Making A Day.

Rating: 5.0


In my deepest sleep I am weaving a dream.
I am sewing the hopes of a future scheme.
I hem an embrace for my lover and I
That never unravels through hurt or lie.

In my deepest dream I am making a day
For my lover and I, which is never grey.
I embroider the sky in cornflower blue,
Then I knit us a house with a country view.

In my deepest repose I begin to stitch
A castle of joy in which we will feel rich
I am making a day like has never been,
With my lover and I as the central theme.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 31 October 2009

Fay, keep dreaming as your weaving sounds beautiful. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Stephen Stirk 31 October 2009

Fay, that is such a lovely muse. Just make sure that you have enough thread. Much enjoyed Steve

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Ian Bowen 31 October 2009

Fay, this is sew good. I am sure you will complete your tapestry before you wake. 10/10 Regards, Ian

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Daniel Kempson 31 October 2009

Good write Fay nice to dream Daniel 10

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rago rago 31 October 2009

good expressions with the lover making a day..........

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Georgia Girl 02 November 2009

Fay this is FANTASTIC! ! ! I love your creativity in this, making with love all of the things for happiness...AWESOME! ! an easy favorite :) 10

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Ann Beard 01 November 2009

May your days be as heartwarming as your poems. Thank you. Regards Ann

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Ernestine Northover 31 October 2009

Love it! Love it! A real dream of a poem. A pleasure to read and so well constructed and produced. Excellent words and storyline. Well done. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Bob Gibson 31 October 2009

In my dream i have prepared, the foundations of love solid with trust, with a little help from above building a future, to keep out the cold a place where young lovers, never grow old

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bye bye... bye bye 31 October 2009

Oh, this is such a cute embroidery! Especially the knitted house with country view! I loved that one! Thanks!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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