Make The Pain Go Poem by Diane Catherine Kordas

Make The Pain Go

Rating: 5.0


Today I was sad,
I was sore
I'm so tired...
I'm tired of hiding it
My sadness....
I just want to cry
Until it doesn't hurt anymore,
Can I sleep,
Until it's gone?
I want to sleep,
To make the pain go.

Monday, December 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written on 21/09/2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 14 March 2017

Deep feelings expressed in a well texted and nicely encapsulated poem. Thanks for sharing Diane and do remain blessed.

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Andesikuteb Peter Yamusa 26 December 2015

If my sleep will make them go so that the will wake me in the morning, The pain better stay. Let me face the monster head on, Armed with nothing but determination, So that when am done with it am sure it will never wish to come back. Then I myself will wake up in the morning and wonder were the pain went

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 December 2015

I want to sleep, To make the pain go. inner struggle, pain, sufferings, loneliness. all these human experiences you have portrayed in this poem in short verses. thankyou. tony

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 21 December 2015

Beautiful expression, one can feel the pain while reading.superb.10+.......

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 December 2015

Stand strong! For, there is hope ahead of you. Nice work.

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