Make Me Smile Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Make Me Smile

Rating: 5.0


Just Close your eyes, feel the sunshine.
Like a new sun rise, like a new day born in,
the skies. Wind blows and I'm tranquilized.
Hear the sounds, and I'm mesmerized. Its A
New Day Here And Now, ... Outside! Leaves
swirl and fall, dancing magically and all..
Such a gentle feeling, sends my heart reeling!
Yet Frozen, in this Wonderful feeling. Wanna
Hold this moment in time. Stare off, and lock
it in my mind...So I can Keep it mine... Just
tuck away the key, so I can come back..and be..
Here Any Old time. I could Stay Just Fine... A
million miles away, , From the Darkness of Yesterday.
Think I'm Gonna Stay...
Here for awhile..Where the Sun and the Breeze, the
Forest and the Streams, , , Make Me Smile! ..

Friday, November 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: content,peaceful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 15 November 2016

Reading this make me feel your happy mood and time, and thats make me join you to smile too :)

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Rebecca Navarre 15 November 2016

Thank You! Soul, That Is Good! ! ! To Hear! ! ! Very Kind! ! ! I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Wonderful Writings! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

With rise of sun sky smiles. Sun rays smile to make us smile and happy. We feel sunshine closing eyes and love is well felt. Very nice imagery is drawn in this poem. Very interesting one this is...10

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2016

Thank You Very Kindly! Kumarmani, So Love Your Poetry! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 November 2016

Feel the sunshine. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2016

Thank You! Edward, For Your Kind Response! Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Writings Too! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! Thank You!

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Seamus O Brian 13 November 2016

Dear Rebecca, this lovely piece blew a breath of peace and tranquility right into my restless, stressed soul. Such delightful imagery to enjoy. Thank you for sharing this vision of peace, and making us all smile!

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2016

That's Wonderful To Hear Neil! Thank You! For Such A Heart warming Comment! Wish You Much Joy And Peace! ! ! Always! ! ! And I Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Wonderful Writings! ! !

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