*** Make Me Or Break Me *** -In Top 500 Poem by ANJALI SINHA

*** Make Me Or Break Me *** -In Top 500

Rating: 4.4


Yes, miles away
your voice distinct,
far away
a cry is heard.
The night is freezing
is inviting
You beside me
Still craving.

Traversed have I
the arenaceous
deserts of despair.
Drunk have I the
wine of your love
from your goblets
of mystical eyes.

Eden sees play.
the glory
of the twilight skies,
like the glitter
of the midnight moon
the shimmer
of the fresh dew
on the first
green blade of grass

Excites me
your name’s alphabets.
On my rosary
spells your name
Haunts me,
your wet lips,
your perspiration
I inhale,
anaesthetize me.
Your looks
inebriates me
traps me
In your magical spell.
Lost am I
day and night
thinking of you.

Your,
intelligence
spellbounds me
eagerness
confounds me,
dedication
astounds me.
Your instinctive
brazenness hounds me
and kindness
surrounds me.

My heart you stole.
What was I doing?
not knowing.
fell for you.
In your contiguity
was my destiny,
loving you
was beyond
my control.
Fate,
brought us together
hoping never to part-

Make me,
the diamond
in your crown,
The moon
of your firmament,
The queen
of your heart,
The love
of your life.
Yours,
everything in life
One in you
MAKE ME YOU

MAKE ME OR
BREAK ME
ITS UPTO YOU

ANJALI SINHA
11-12-2008

THIS POEM I DEDICATE TO A SPECIAL PERSON WHO IS MILES AWAY BUT ALWAYS IN MY HEART AND MIND

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 13 April 2009

Can he afford to make all what you want here? i guess not.At least the words will have a good breakthrough as it demands a 10 from me.

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Siddharth Singh 13 July 2009

Your fiery passion will completely melt the heart even though it's mles apart.

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Piyush Sharma 27 July 2009

A love so pure. Complete surrender. In Physics, Resistance = 0 makes the best circuit, the smooth flow of love electrons. The title of the poem itself is amazing and is extremely striking and amazing. Good poem and u get yet another 10.

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Anand Madhukar 15 September 2009

A perfectly nuanced write, with each feeling, each emotion stretched out on the rainbow hued thread of your beautifully woven words. A perfect 10[do you even need to ask? ]

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Nikunj Sharma 17 September 2009

After a long long time, I am seeing a poem from you....this one is really sweet as honey , smooth as silk and heart stealing as a full moon...I like the sway in the poem, the motion is good too...slowly then the poem turns its direction and captures the reader.........wow is the word and 10 is the mark...

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Aa36 19 07 June 2021

Loved it

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Sita Madu-Wynn 27 June 2016

Beautiful and well penned !!!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 April 2016

Make me, the diamond in your crown, The moon of your firmament, The queen of your heart, The love of your life. Yours, everything in life One in you MAKE ME YOU MAKE ME OR BREAK ME ITS UPTO YOU Nice lines..Loved this poem. Thank you poetess.

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Lyn Paul 28 January 2015

Make me, the diamond in your crown Oh so beautiful Anjali. If this love is miles away let this not matter. Just read these incredible words each day to not be broken. Truly beautiful. Congratulations on TOP 500. Amazing! !

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Akhtar Jawad 02 July 2014

A great dedication to a special person, best wishes, The poem is really lovely.

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