Majestic Beauty Poem by Kaila George

Majestic Beauty

Rating: 5.0


She sat atop a hill
And was struck by

The beauty that lay
At her feet

The billowing clouds
Floated in a sky of blue

The mountain stood tall
That engulfed in its
Majestic beauty
As far as the eye can see

The grass as green
As the meadows of spring

The morning sunshine
Shines down upon you

Its beauty, its splendors
At Mother Natures poetic strings

Caressing the child
That looks with innocent eyes

That moves your soul
And takes your breath away

Oh what a sight
That befalls unto thee

Are we not lucky to be?
Apart of this Majestic scene

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was 12 as I recall the trip to a camp were I climb my first mountain, it had public access that enabled us to climb its highest summit.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

What an apropos title to this fine jewel of a verse...as Majestic & Beauy-(ful) are the 2 words I was going to use to describe this poem! One observation, if I could be bold & un-beautiful...Couplet 3...It is 'billowing' as opposed to 'bellowing'...I'm an expert at catching these human elements err's, but only because i'm an expert at makin' a ton of my own! You Rock, Kaila! ~FjR~

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