Maiden Wave Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Maiden Wave

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The dashing wave
Of the sea
Rushed to the shore
And embraced me.

I was moved
By the intimacy
The maiden wave
Expressed.

Before I could
Ask for a kiss
With a cool swing
She went away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 August 2014

very pleasant poem and I had read it yesterday itself..Thank you for sharing your wonderful thought here..

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Dimitrios Galanis 24 December 2015

How nice the conception!

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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 03 September 2014

Beautiful poem. Those waves are not dependable.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

Cool and pleasant poem to read. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Savita Tyagi 26 August 2014

So beautiful and sweet. Reminded me of my poem ' Honey Wave', thought little bit different in thought.Thanks for sharing.

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Hans Vr 26 August 2014

Wow, short and impressive. Wonderful expression of a moment

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