! Magnetic Signals Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! Magnetic Signals

Rating: 3.1


Collect geosynchronous orbital
signals spin and churn orb
cover, store inertial
flywheel source in gyroscope
believe in extrasensory perceptions
store frozen panels in all four
chambers of heart
float innumerous war pirates
faceless entities from there
in your ardent blend
reproduce non invasive diagnostic
methods, paint magnetic resonance
images, utilize coronary stents
to de clog as required and play
with the central nervous systems
of external entities
feast one intellectual treat
and malign datum lines
on geodesy of tiny planets
float again war pirates
from there in colors and
various nationalities...
in one eco friendly earth to
silence one here...
and remain there in silence
to fake lies for ever......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 14 August 2008

It's hard.But I guess it's about global protection.I must go through it some more times.Thanks for sharing Rema

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Kesav Easwaran 27 August 2008

the eco friendly ego friendly earth on orbit in a geodesy of lies...decides to remain silent...the first part of the poem detailing how...another highly introspective write from Rema...impressive presentation 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 August 2008

yeah, this poem has its magnatism too......10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 August 2008

Rema, your poems are always storehouses of knowledge, jargon, and thoughtful propositions, good messages and sometimes recondite. This is another excellent piece.10

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 August 2008

This poem both challenges & nourishes the'''Central Nervous System'''! Much abstract verve & pictorial detail, ...And to top it all...I LIKE IT ! ~ F j R ~ ....Fini....

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Chitra - 16 August 2008

magnetic lines these are they diffuse magnetic resonance everywhere

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