'Madness' (Senryu) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

'Madness' (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


seclusion—null Self—
the divine in human—God,
reality, fade.

Tuesday, July 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mystical,consciousness,spirituality,madness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sina Farajzadeh 31 July 2014

Hi. I read your work. It is hard to interpret it. Well, it is short and deep I guess. Reallity fades. I like it when you call human a Man-God and how you yourself are the divine voice. Good Luck

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Heather Wilkins 10 August 2014

short deep and well written I enjoyed the read

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2018

Brief but beautiful. Enjoyable.

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Daniel Brick 10 September 2014

I read all of the comments on this poem. Only one person admitted to being confused by it. I'll step forward as the second to be confused. It's called MADNESS - is the madness that of a human being who considers himself equal to God, a god himself? ? And the first line - I can't follow it grammatically. Seclusion none Self. There's ambiguity in self spelled with a capital S, because it refers to levels of being in Buddhism and Hinduism, but is that happening here?

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

Quiet Interesting. Short and meaningful. I just loved it.

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Ency Bearis 15 August 2014

I like the brevity remarkable

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Anthony Burkett 11 August 2014

Ooooooo! Lovely! I do so much enjoy your poetry... haiku is my favorite! Very difficult, but well worth the effort when successfully accomplished... as you my dear have so eloquently done! Touché to you and your pen!

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