Mad In Love Poem by Pratikshya Sedhain

Mad In Love

Rating: 4.3


I want to fly in the sky,
along with you, winning the shy.

I want to go in the market,
for buying bat, to play cricket.

I want to play with you boy,
and have fun, along with joy.

I want to be a super star,
with my boy, my favorite star.

I want to do whatever you want,
to live without you, I think I can't.

I want to see you with my eye,
till the day I completely die...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandan Kumar Mandal 30 December 2013

Simple yet powerful in emotions....Cheers! ! !

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Jeevan Aryal 19 October 2018

Interesting poem.... beautiful..

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Young Church Poetry 13 April 2017

Wow that is so sweet of you. He is the luckiest guy, that is how love is supposed to be.

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Rajendran Muthiah 11 February 2016

Dear budding poetess of Nepal, the wonderous land of Nature. The hills, vales, winding and flowing rivers, the waterfalls and other fertile fields of your country will inspire you to write the sweetest songs of youthful life. Read the poems of our fellow poets and enrich yourself with English diction. Wish you all the best.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 January 2016

I want to do whatever you want, to live without you, I think I can't. I want to see you with my eye, till the day I completely die.. i want , i want, , all wishes and aspirations and desires of love and life. thank you for this poem. tony

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Pratikshya Sedhain 11 March 2014

thank you sir i want to invite you to read my other poems tooo.......................

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