..Lust.. A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins....... Poem by Eyan Desir
..Lust.. A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins.......
Straight from the gutters of hell!
She blows, sweeter than sugar
She burns, flaming desires
Consuming all our emotions
Imitating the wings of love
Exciting and breath taking
Over flowing souls with her passion
Raging with infatuation
Hungry with an obsession
Not submitting to devotion
So powerful and strong
Luscious tasty desires
Never last a lifetime
But cause some a lifetime of pain
04 August 2009 Copyright © ® Eyan desir. All rights reserved
This is a great piece Eyan...well structured and flows like a dream...I can't understand why it's been rated so low....keep up the great work....lovely to have you back
great command of vocabulary but again...just a one-sided, narrow minded viewpoint...
still a fan, very nicely done, Please read ' Need II' of mine als
very nice, Eyan an awakening piece... Lust...can cripple our soul.. I love your theme.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia
nice read.......i liked the last lines the most.....others are equally good........ good one, , , , , ,
fantastic desires take our lives and are not we sensuous stall.........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 7:44:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I like it! It goes through the different parts of LUST, describing to a point that you can almost feel it