Lush Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Lush

Rating: 5.0


Near the flowering meadow-
Lilac's they scent the breeze-
Veiled 'neath motion-filled skies-
Are the Oak and Cherry Trees...

Running in crystal clear ripples-
O'er pebbles of days of past time-
'Tis a silver sparkled brook-
With small hills, nearby to climb...

The Vale 'tis sheer enchantment-
Pastoral views, they do abound-
Rustic-Bucholic-themed-
These visions, breath-takingly astound!

The colour-splashed panoramas of: The Artist-
From His palette to His feathery brush-
Done in oils or in water colours-
Captured are His Vales, Most Lush!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 22 September 2007

just read something like 'cosmic honey comb' from leonard. now, yet another honeycomb of words oozing honey.

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J. Martinez 16 October 2007

This is a brilliant poem i myself usually do not write in a scheme occasionally when the mood strikes but i appreciate poets who do awesome poem!

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Theodora Onken 26 September 2007

Thanks to both of you; Allie and meggie. Your words do mean more than i could ever say! Blessings and love, Theo XXXX: 0)

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Alison Cassidy 26 September 2007

Lush is such an delicious word and you have used it to great effect in this pretty pastoral piece of worship and thanksgiving. It almost sounds like a hymn. Beautiful penning. love, Allie xxxx

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Meggie Gultiano 24 September 2007

So we can now experience the beauty God has given to us..It's beautifully well describe the scenery, and i can feel it..Wish i was there, have the privilege to paint, too..thanks for sharing

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 September 2007

Such a beautiful landscape you paint with your art, most lush indeed... andy 10

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