My Honey !
you are more sweeter than honey
more salty than water of ocean
more bitter than chilly
My Honey!
you are more pacific than pacific
more furious than Atlantic
waves sprouting from your heart
are more stronger than Tsunami
waves of your heart are more cooler than moon
more hotter than sun
In lunatic war i am always defeated
I feel myself as a prisioner as if
arrested under handcuff of your love
so, i never dare to wage lunatic war.
No sense arguing with a woman Ramesh. We poor men can never win. Ha ha. We still love them though.
Fantastic stuff, such a wonderful sentiment for someone that inspired you, so many wonderful lines, the final stanza was the coup de grace. An excellent work about the lunatic war of love.
different aspects of women mind...................nice....like it
A Beautiful poem with fantastic lines...... In lunatic war i am always defeated I feel myself as a prisioner as if arrested under handcuff of your love so, i never dare to wage lunatic war. Everything is fair in love and war. There can never be a defeat in war of love. Loved the way you presented it.
War, when fought for love and with love cannot be destructive but constructive! In real love, even a defeat is a conquest! enjoyed this beautiful poem on love!
This defeat in the battle of love is the ultimate victory that proves you a vigorous male and when the beloved is an appealing mixture of lovely contrasts she is the beloved that appeared in the sweet ghazals of Ghalib and Meer. A welcome surrender before this heavenly beauty.10.
arrested under handcuff of your love The power of love is nicely presented in wonderful arresting lines. Lovely poem. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
She is your Sweet Honey and the lunatic war should never be fought. A great tribute paid to a unique feel and bond of love.