Lucky Whisper Poem by Neran Sati

Lucky Whisper



Noon pondering, summer inn..
Success to achieve, what does it mean?
Money, fame or sailing over sea?
Zephyr's whisper in my ear

It's all about - getting free!

Friday, September 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: success,freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 14 October 2015

Free from useless passions and grief! that's what we really need! lovely!

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Neran Sati 14 October 2015

I agree Lisa, what one should be striving for - tough general subject, yet at core of individual freedom! Thanks so much for this comment!

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Kelly Kurt 18 September 2015

Freeing one's self, physically, mentally and spiritually from the entrapments of society. Nicely penned, Neran

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Neran Sati 18 September 2015

And from one's ego, too! Thanks for your remark, Kelly

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