Lucky Poem by Rachael Wai Ai Ching

Lucky



Everybodys lucky
Lucky to have a family
Weather you like it or not
No matter how you came into the family
It's just better than having none

It's a gift from God
Some may be rich like Lords
But some may not have alot

So Love them
Help them Everyday

Care for them
Try to help them if you can

In fine or stormy weather
Help each other
And you know that you're Lucky
To keep the family happy together
Living in Harmony and Peace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christian Navarro 09 January 2010

your poem is nice... good topic for a twelve year-old. i suggest you read more from dictionaries and encyclopedias to gain more knowledge..

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 January 2010

'Weather you like it or not' i think this should be 'Whether you like it or not' anyway, you have a fine piece right here!

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