Loving Working Poem by Naomi Shihab Nye

Loving Working

Rating: 5.0


"We clean to give space for Art."
Micaela Miranda, Freedom Theatre, Palestine

Work was a shining refuge when wind sank its tooth
into my mind. Everything we love is going away,
drifting - but you could sweep this stretch of floor,
this patio or porch, gather white stones in a bucket,
rake the patch for future planting, mop the counter
with a rag. Lovely wet gray rag, squeeze it hard
it does so much. Clear the yard of blowing bits of plastic.
The glory in the doing. The breath of the doing.
Sometimes the simplest move kept fear from
fragmenting into no energy at all, or sorrow from
multiplying, or sorrow from being the only person
living in the house.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 28 April 2018

Not a poem of excellence for this category.

0 4 Reply
Bernard F. Asuncion 28 April 2018

Such an interesting write👍👍👍

2 1 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 28 April 2018

Lovely wet gray rag! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

1 1 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 19 February 2019

Clear the yard of blowing bits of plastic. The glory in the doing. The breath of the doing. Sometimes the simplest move kept fear from fragmenting into no energy at all, a fine poem.. thank u. tony

0 0 Reply
Savita Tyagi 28 April 2018

Work comes to rescue when nothing else is left. Great poem.

1 0 Reply
Adrian Flett 28 April 2018

'the simplest move kept fear from fragmenting' resonated with the aloneness. I liked the rhythm of the lines working with the mundane tasks and leading to the last lines. Thanks for the journey. Adrian

1 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2018

Beautifully presented. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

1 0 Reply
Susan Williams 28 April 2018

The more I read this poem the more I like it- - there really are layers to this piece. I think she would be worthwhile to read more from- she is elusive in some ways yet forthright in others.

2 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Naomi Shihab Nye

Naomi Shihab Nye

St. Louis, Missouri
Close
Error Success