Loving Face Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Loving Face

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Remain as you wish to be
Enough space is provided for free
Plan the schedule as it suits
Enjoy the life and love to greet

Peace is essential
From the initial (period)
For revival
Survival

Long absence does not matter
Little time does not alter
The relation does exist
Bond still survives the test

You may be wired
Yet admired
Not at all stared
Not subjected to satire

Love the way you like
Let friends dislike
One knows how far to stretch
Remain in mood and lovingly catch

I may be talkative
But remain subjective
Love provides nutrition
Real mode for relation

I was never at ease
When got enough of peace
It was all by god’s grace
I got from you the loving face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

Remain as you wish to be Enough space is provided for free

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

Maricela Ramírez likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

i love it malenky malenky7 minutes ago it was good Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

Good StarFlyer 266 minutes ago I like this, very sweet but not simple... well done xx Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

Good talkative poem Anthony Parker6 minutes ago Structure is great! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2014

Loving face Jason Sky Johnson6 minutes ago The poet tells of the feelings of a man and his feelings for love. I like the flow of words in particular here.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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