Loves True Wish Poem by River someday

Loves True Wish

Rating: 4.8


Your face was radiant
Your voice was strong
Your arms were safe
Your eyes turquise in the winter
A light Blue in the summer
The way I felt around you
I was safe, protected, cared for
But you just didn't see me the same way
You were my best friend
I cracked and that was one thing I promised I would never do
I opened up and told you everything
A big mistake over and over again
I felt empty when I was away from you
But you never knew until that late march day
My true wish was to be loved by you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marc Mannheimer 30 January 2008

Yes, very nice. She felt, or didn't feel, the same way about me. But we are still friends, and I value that even more now.

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Devin Mckeever 08 December 2007

I really enjoyed reading this poem! Very good

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