Loves Point Of No Return Poem by louis rams

Loves Point Of No Return

Rating: 5.0


carry me to the point of no return
take my heart before it burns
take my soul where ever you go
move fast, don't move slow.

you have put this fire in my soul
and it is burning very fast.
the oxygen that keeps it ignited
will not last.

you control my heart, like a queen bee
controls its hive
you make my being feel alive.

and when i look upon your lips
i want to feel your tender kiss.
for a kiss, is a kiss, until it's missed.

then it becomes a passion
a desire, a flaming fire.
it consumes your every thought,
your every wish, until once again
you feel that kiss.

you get a tingling from head to toe
feelings you thought you'd never know.
you feel the arms wrapped around your waist
you miss the warmth of that embrace.

this is the point of no return
this is the point that we must learn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 02 June 2009

Beautifully done, yet so hard to find. Sweet thoughts

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'you make my being feel alive. and when i look upon your lips i want to feel your tender kiss. for a kiss, is a kiss, until it's missed. ' beautiful! ! !

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Kranthi Pothineni 31 May 2009

Very nice write. Thoroughly enjoyed my read. Beautiful flow with wonderful title.10.

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Christine Kerr 31 May 2009

Sounds like fiest love to me. Nice to see love being explained.Breautiful thoughts 10+++

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Sandra Fowler 31 May 2009

Very passionate. May your love survive beyond the point of no return. 10.for this. Warm regards, Sandra

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