Loves Flaming Fire Poem by louis rams

Loves Flaming Fire

Rating: 5.0


let me walk by your side
let me feel what you try to hide.
let me see where you have been
from the beginning to the end.

let me feel your aches and pains
let me cover up your shames.
let me be your second skin
so that no harm could ever get in.

let me protect you from the storm
for it is here that i belong.
let my 'loves flaming fire'
fill your heart with desire
the desire to be loved forever more.
for there is so much that i have in store.

i will take your broken heart
and put it together part by part.
i will make it whole again
so we could be much more than friends.

you had searched your whole life through
when i was right next to you.
given the chance you will see
that i'll love you endlessly.

you must extinguish this flaming fire
before it gets any higher.
love me, as i have loved you
for my heart has always been true.

this is my:
'LOVES FLAMING FIRE'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Kerr 02 August 2009

I think this would be under, 'Having Sweet Dreams' or Only In Your Dreams, Every persons desire, Beautiful thoughts. 10++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 01 August 2009

beautifully written....the care and devotion of the person shows in each line....10

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 August 2009

Well expresed. The starting two verses were really good.

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Stay away from my girlfriend..! fine lines sir.

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