louis rams

Rookie - 619 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

Lovers On The Beach


We watched the sun rising in the sky
We were on the beach, just she and I.
A cool gentle breeze blowing upon our face
As we stared into the depths of space.
We was holding hands as we sat on the sand
Enjoying the beauties of GODS land.
The waters so calm and blue
As the seagulls above us flew.
Little sand crabs playing at our feet
And searching for anything that they could eat.
As we sat there our minds were reeling
Thinking of the joys that we were feeling.
An inner peace that could not be described
As we sat there side by side.
We was totally hypnotized
As we saw the love in each other’s eyes.
Love can be found all around
But on this beach there was but one sound
Two hearts that were beating together
This could not have gotten much better.
With love there are no boundaries that cannot be overcome
If we face it as but “ONE”.
The sun “now” above the horizon
With its rays shining every where
Wiping away all worries and cares.
We are but two lovers- enjoying all that GOD had done
Sitting on the sand, watching the rising sun.

Submitted: Monday, July 01, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Lovers On The Beach by louis rams )

  • Bronze Star - 2,851 Points Patricia Grantham (7/29/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    A very nice romantic love poem. Nothing can compare with two lovers
    sitting on the beach. A very serene and relaxing atmosphere especially
    to be enjoyed by lovers. A lovely write. Please read my poem A Lovers Stroll. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/2/2013 1:02:00 PM)

    a lovely write Luis. I enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 341 Points Don Nguyen (7/1/2013 9:46:00 PM)

    My own story too
    Very nice.
    Thanks (Report) Reply

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