Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Lovely Tweet - Poem by Aftab Alam

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When an arrow hit on my heart
Through the bow of her eyes
I died on the love bed and
Resurrected like a saint wise

Next day onward in my bed tea
I dissolved the love, tasty and sweet
Made airy mirror, saw her safe in lee
Sat on net and made a lovely tweet


Comments about Lovely Tweet by Aftab Alam

  • Veteran Poet - 1,149 Points Unwritten Soul (12/13/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    That tweet must be so sweet like birdy tweets hahaha_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,852 Points Sallam Yassin (12/5/2013 11:11:00 AM)

    Lovely tweed indeed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,016 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/4/2013 12:36:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. Its a lovely tweet. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 4, 2013



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