Lovely Lies Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Lovely Lies

Rating: 5.0


The lovely woman can too of lovely lies,

But the eyes speaks one one's truely always.

But all dreamers does dream by open eyes,

Some will not know never.. if wish the know isn't

where the half-truth comes to an end...

where the half-lie begins in eyes... and she went

For, lovely woman can not any lovely lies, never...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 27 May 2009

nice nice poem Tsira! 10..

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LOVEFOOL Aka 27 May 2009

Much truth finely woven 10+++

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Kevin Carney 22 January 2011

Tsira, so true in what you say. I like the line about how it starts with the eyes. I really enjoyed this and it is so true 10+

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R. H. Peat 29 November 2010

Crit4 Lovely Lady Lies The lovely woman can too of lovely lies, (The lovely woman can also tell lovely lies) But the eyes speaks one one's truely always. (but her eyes speak what is always true) But all dreamers does dream by open eyes, (for all dreamers dream with open eyes) Some will not know never.. if wish the know isn't (Some will never know.. a wish isn’t known) where the half-truth comes to an end... (where the half-truth comes to an end…) where the half-lie begins in eyes... and she went (Because the half-lie begins in her eyes) For, lovely woman can not any lovely lies, never... (that’s why lovely woman cannot tell a lie; ever.) The English here is extremely difficult to understand. I think this is your meaning line for line; but I’m not sure at all. It tough when the English has to be translated into English. ☺ But If’ I’m right; I like the poem a lot. The lovely woman can also tell lovely lies but her eyes speak what is always true for all dreamers dream with open eyes. Some will never know.. her wish isn’t known where her half-truth comes to an end… Because the half-lie begins in her eyes that’s why the lovely woman cannot tell a lie; ever. a poet friend//RH Peat

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James Mclain 30 May 2009

The lovely woman sits-half inside outside waits, on sun. The womans hot side, waits is cool side, so rain may see. Her roses, is only half opens, can she still the flowers sleep. With only half his words, in it? ...iip

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Lynda Robson 27 May 2009

Lies always come out in the end, good write from you, 10 Lynda xx

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Fiona Davidson 27 May 2009

This is so true Tsira...well written....Fi 10+++

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