Love, Your Heart Poem by Neela Nath Das

Love, Your Heart

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Love, your heart is mine,
kneading it I'll refine
the threads of your design.
I must remove its roughness
increasing its smoothness,
I shall enhance its grace.

Monday, October 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 October 2014

Truly said - love is the smoother that removes the roughness thanks Max rating for the content :

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Sekharan Pookkat 27 October 2014

kindness and softness engraved in mind enriched with love removes roughness of heart - I love it

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Akhtar Jawad 27 October 2014

The idea of kneading a heart, removing its roughness, increasing its smoothness and finally enhancing its grace, seems to me a motherly job for a son or a daughter. Liked this lovely poem.

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