Love Without Being Discontent Poem by Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Love Without Being Discontent




Mere presence is enough
To let me know
She is there for me.
Sheer silence is enough
To sound me that
She relishes my presence.
Bare talks are enough
To make me know
What are unsaid.
Fear to advance is enough
for me to discern that
Her heart is at war.
We drank our juice of love
With content, without
Other’s discontent.
03.08.2004

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 17 October 2009

Your last verse speaks volumes about love being shared in utmost heartfelt way! ! ! Thanks!

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Lady Grace 18 October 2009

and that is LOVE...nicely done

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Lalitha iyer 21 October 2009

Ha, Ha, Ha, that is old age...........Poor man cannot say I love you, because he feels he is grey haired and old and going to die and wanting a partner he feels is too immatured.......................and the poor thing is only satisfied with mere presences...........LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

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Lalitha iyer 21 October 2009

Ha, Ha, Ha, that is old age...........Poor man cannot say I love you, because he feels he is grey haired and old and going to die and wanting a partner he feels is too immatured.......................and the poor thing is only satisfied with mere presences...........LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

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Lalitha iyer 21 October 2009

Ha, Ha, Ha, that is old age...........Poor man cannot say I love you, because he feels he is grey haired and old and going to die and wanting a partner he feels is too immatured.......................and the poor thing is only satisfied with mere presences...........LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

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Akhtar Jawad 06 April 2018

What an amazing poem, Ram Shanmugam Chettiar is a real poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2016

Love! ! She is there for me. Nice work.

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Sonorous lines and blending words

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Beautiful and sonorous lines.

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A perfectly beautiful poem on love.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar

Aravayal, karaikudi, Tamil Nadu, South India
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