Love When In Hide Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Love When In Hide

Rating: 5.0


tears when rain in pain of sorrow
heart yet blows as when hurt
love seems to be chilled by the shadow
as when lonely and alone clippered by wing

love yet eternal flows by the heart
happens to resurrect again by warmth of sun
smile when befuddles by the darkness
clouds seem to glow deeper and deeper

heart when endeared by the resilience
shadow seems to shiver by the wind
depth happens to blaze by the flames
in deep darkness even if shadowed

as rain in tears slowly begins to respire
wind when blows clouds from the plumes
cry yet delves out the love from the hide
by the resonance even from the fire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 29 January 2009

deep words greatly crafted to form into a very brilliant and catching piece touching....trials of a hidden love i can feel the serenity in pain... unable to show the love..... lovely penned....reflects a mystery within...10++++

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Thad Wilk 28 February 2008

A beautiful write Dr. Kar! And Christopher's comment says it all! ! *10*! ! Best regards , Friend Thad

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Broken Peaces 28 February 2008

Dr. your work has a serenity that is so peaceful to the eye I read with no effortonly an inner calmness thankyou Chris 10

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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