Love V Hate Poem by kenneth william snow

Love V Hate

Rating: 4.5


Love in seventeen
syllables is intellect
trampled by passion

Hate in seventeen
syllables is intellect
restored and angry

True love grows from hate
tempered by desire to
cleave equilibrium

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick Bateman 16 October 2006

Tremendous display of poetic muscle. A good ending is essential to leaving the reader with a savory after taste and you nailed it: 'cleave equilibrium'.

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