Love Uncertain Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Love Uncertain

Rating: 5.0


I guess you lost your patience,
And found a broken heart.
I should have told you sooner,
Uncertain love's, not smart.

In courting love uncertain,
You can't get any more;
Than what they choose to give you,
I told you this before.

I'm sorry for your feelings.
I know you're very hurt.
But when you take a lover,
You get a just dessert.

So while a cherished moment,
May seem a certain love.
Remember, love forever,
Is what you're dreaming of.

And that is what it is you see.
A dream that can't come true;
As long as you're pursuing,
Uncertain loves, untrue.

So stop, and just consider,
Should you become its wife;
The choice of love uncertain,
Means chosen pain for life.

With painful love considered,
You must now fear the thought.
So run from love uncertain,
It always comes to naught.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tia Maria 05 July 2008

OH... this is brilliant! My sentiments exactly - 10/10 PS - in response to one of the readers comments - all the four letter words were very necessary to get the point across ;)

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Jeannie Ann Clark 06 July 2008

This is an excellent writing; and very true. Thank you, Jeannie.

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Ency Bearis 07 July 2008

In reality this is true... I' ll like the way you express the emotion in this poem.. Do I need to say more... everything is there... good write..

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 07 July 2008

Love Uncertain...such a sad song! Dorothy

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M M 09 July 2008

A lovely poem based upon experience, a warm warning towards unstable love which shows, on the contrary, what true love would be. Very interesting! 10

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Cristy Upshaw 03 June 2009

'Love Uncertain' isn't all love uncertain, nothing is ever a guarantee, so when we go into a relationship in love we are uncertain it will last or how it will affect us. nice write, hun.

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Autum Skiles 22 October 2008

all I can say is this is amazing! ! !

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 October 2008

To say least, i felt when i read the poem. the great. cheers

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Darlyn Rose Villarosa 06 October 2008

you're poem is true... but you should understand that some girls are weak and easy to make them fall in love... easy to do whatever you want them to do because they give a 110% when they fall... even there are many playboy or heartbrakers they don't stop believing that someday they will be ending up with the right man... I know guys sometimes wish that there just one woman that will stay beside him forever... keep him company.... make him happy... take care of him... and love him...

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Moana Tuigamala 05 September 2008

Amazing....you sure are gifted. this poem really suits me and my condition. great job.

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