Love $truck Poem by tanvi damle

Love $truck

Rating: 3.4


I promise myself that I'm not gonna talk to you at all,
but then why do I keep waiting for your call?
I convince myself that you nothing to me mean,
but then why do I of you every night dream?
I know you're never gonna stop by,
but then why do I keep waiting to say hi?
I tell myself that now its never gonna be the same,
but then why does my heart skip a beat on hearing your name?
It's over, I've moved on I say,
but then why do I find it so hard to walk away?
I promise myself that i won't see you much,
but then why do my eyes still for you search?
I tell myself that everything between us was not just right,
but then why do I think of you every night?
I promise to move on, leave everything behind,
but why can't I still get you off my mind?
I know you'll never again by my house go,
but then why do I still keep looking out of the window?
I guess I'll always love you deep down in my heart,
there we'll always be together even if we're far apart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adam Reed 23 January 2010

fantastic poem! i think you would like mine called 'i see things'. i think its sort of the same =) anyways great write!

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Akshay B 23 January 2010

awesome! simply awesome so true in many cases

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Peter Strugnell 15 July 2010

can't believe i've never commented on this poem before, your sentiments are beautifully well expressed.It's really precise, no wasted words, i like it. I've just written a poem on the same subject, 'I hate myself' but it's not as poetic as yours! cheers tanvi all the best, be lucky in love

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 06 February 2010

A very fine sharing and expression of true love with associated longing, passion and affection. Beautiful verse reflecting the romance within and the intimacy being enjoyed.

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true Little angel ...! ! ! 06 February 2010

nice.. sweet... love between the tongue of mind and the heart action.... enjoyable.. keep writing

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Lost Poet 02 February 2010

cant stop myself reading dis poem again n again.........................really nice work dear.......... bt grow up n fk dat guy out of ur memories.......may b he dont deserve dat............ do read mah poem..'i hate her...'

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 24 January 2010

Love of a salamander? oooooffffffffff! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The title is misleading. Otherwise I could surely ask: For whom? Where? and When? all advervial questions.. he he he

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