Love To Whisper Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Love To Whisper

Rating: 5.0


If you can lend me your ears
Listen carefully and hear
I would love to whisper
Gently for no other listener

I was in confusion
With so many questions
How to put and present?
Exactly same way I felt

Not swords along can win
Not words alone can adore the scene
I have experienced it since
I want no words to mince

It reveals no secret
Yes bit makes it to let
My love for you has remained unknown
I want it to happen

I visit barren land
And find flowers at dead end
But that too look friendly
As if to show love readily

I have only one desire
To speak you very clear
That I need your support
To anchor at the safe port

That shall give friendship call
It will demolish unfriendly wall
I shall be called one of the luckiest
Ever known to any one as closest

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Very well said, friendship wall can demolish the unfriendly wall....Beautiful poem..Loved reading it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2013

A decent poem Gareth Jones3 minutes ago But there a few wording errors, but certainly a good flow and meaning. Comment +1 Hidden feelings

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2013

Jenepher Lane3 minutes ago This writer seems to have hidden feelings for someone. I like his perspective. I hope that someday he can tell the person he feels this way about.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2013

Debra DeBauche Stewart likes this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2013

f you can lend me your ears Listen carefully and hear

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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