Love To Hate Poem by Richard McClellan

Love To Hate



Sitting alone,
just my thoughts with me,
my mind is blank,
no good thoughts I see,

abandoned n' feeling used,
love burned to hate,
now the one I can't stand,
it happened at such a fast rate,

its like gambling, the flipping of a coin,
love n hate on separate sides,
when it lands on hate,
then the love just dies,

as embers turn to ash,
the smell of smoke on the breeze,
no actions to take,
for a mind that's blank n' filled with hate,

somehow I have burned love to hate!

the candle reached its end,
the flame of love has went out,
no love left in the heart,
just the hate to let out,

like drowning in a river,
of fire smoldering hot,
no actions do I take,
when I have burned love to hate!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theany Ouy 04 November 2011

Wow! I felt all your emotions through every lines, for I can relate. Your feelings are so deep and blunt. Very insightful. I like it. I really enjoyed this piece a lot. Thank you for sharing...

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Lady Keys *rainbow Gang* 01 November 2011

OH SNAP I ACTUALLY LOVE IT VERY NICE PIECE KEEP WRITING RAINBOW CHIC ;)

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