Ruby Mostazir

Rookie - 15 Points (dhaka)

@ Love Story

It was not a simple love story about attraction
Or madness of immature age
It was a story about love and more than that
It was critical, it was kind of simple mathematics too

It was about 2 feeble hearts;
It was about 2 thirsty souls;
It was about 2 friends, sharing their moments
Their secrets, sorrows and joys
They knew it that love will crop up soon between them
They wanted to bury their feelings in their mind
They wanted to keep distances
The boy never proposed her
The girl never admit;
Yet 2 hearts falling down and down
Yet love happened
They sailed with an unnamed boat,
shimmering with Love
Respects and oodles of Care for each other
They lived their lives with a thousand joys
In a couple of days
But they never dare to dream
No future was waiting for them to welcome their relation

So they decided to back
They decided to be apart
When the moment of departure arrived
They tried to comfort each other
As death is waiting in front of them...

They tried to catch up the moment forever
They tried to hold their hands
They tried to hug tight

The last kiss!
The last hug!
Last time to say good bye!
Its hard..
Its hurts...
Its paining a lot….

But they allowed all pains & sufferings to their life
For the sake of this harsh world
They give up their all
and illusions
Maybe for them it was the best solution?

So, the boy back to his abnormally sick and sad planet
And the girl cased up again,
On between four walls.....
On that night sky shed tears
like thousand of rain drops falls.....

Submitted: Tuesday, February 25, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, February 26, 2014


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  • Rookie - 84 Points Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 11:39:00 PM)

    a sad and poignant really brings pain, but also eternity..................beautiful write... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,120 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/19/2014 12:53:00 AM)

    I am deeply saddened by this poem. Its poignancy and intensity. A love story that will touch many a heart and perhaps, shed some drops of tears from some eyes. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,094 Points * Sunprincess * (3/11/2014 5:18:00 PM) this your love story? ... if so, then I am very sorry it didn't work out for can't always catch the big fish you know...a poem of a broken heart written in simple language... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,052 Points Kanav Justa (3/10/2014 1:14:00 AM)

    , , , a poignant write, , , sounds like a real story, , , the pain of these lovers can be easily felt in you write, , , nicely done, , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Niken Kusuma Wardani (2/25/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    it's a touching poem, sometimes love doesn't cross each other path so it just went straight all along. it's painful perhaps. but love never requires more than love itself.. emotion is a part of heart that some ppl has to deal with, thanks for sharing the wonderful poem (Report) Reply

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