Love Stinks Poem by Vanessa Hernandez

Love Stinks

Rating: 5.0


I've been told
'Love is great, love is awesome love is this love is that'
I used to want to have all that.
But now that I've been hurt so many times
I do not want to have that feeling anymore
No...not anymore.
What I don't get is...
Why does nothing last, why?
I thought I was in love...wait...wait a minute.
No i knew I was in love til he just completetly destroyed me with two simple words.
'Its over...'
Over? OVER? Uh-uh.
It ain't over til I say its over.
Now we are through...
Simply I had anger within me
yet sadness also...
Sadness took over me more then madness
which I am grateful..
'tis I do no want to be in love
not anymore anyways...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neojuna Riddick 14 July 2009

An explosive deep poem. As if all that I feel, you put into words. The poem is brutal. That is a rare treat. Looking forward to many more.

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