Love Speaks Poem by Molay Toufik

Good poem if i say but you also need to improve on the choice of other words you use

nice poem keep writing the more you write, the better you get you seem to have alot of feelings.. poetry is the best outlet ofcourse one question: do you write poetry in French as well?

Hi molay Your poem is sweet and real. I get the sense of it real well. The wording could be better. Pps comment on my poems.

if its your first piece of work..i must say its very good. you cn imagine th concept and th feel of th poem a lill better though...but nevertheless, its a good poem.. :)

This is a very emotional poem.It's very sweet but it could be better........but I really liked it!

Your love poem is good, keep it up.

Evocative art in truth love and more work...

I immensely enjoyed reading this poem. It's a very good write. The rhyming scheme added a certain flair to the poem. I will enjoy reading more.

Pretty good. It would definitely make your poem alot better if you studied English more. That would make it a lot easier to read and understand, and make it alot better overall. Hope you find it helpful.

nice rhyming, i enjoyed reading this