Love Sonnet 229: 'when Trophies Rained Upon My Neighbor's Yard' Poem by Reyvrex Questor Reyes

Love Sonnet 229: 'when Trophies Rained Upon My Neighbor's Yard'

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When trophies rained upon my neighbor's yard,  
With not a trickle spilling down my lawn,
 Seems that misfortune fell on me so hard,  
Thru nights of darkness without hints of dawn;  
Time pelted me with woes that I can't shake,  
To fill my cup to fullness ever since 
That day, this yoke my shoulders vowed to take,  
That all my brows, with saline sweats would rinse;  
But lifeline bridged the sea, cast from your hands,  
To fetch this castaway from raging waves,  
At last in your embrace I found dry lands,  
Your eyes, the guiding stars this sailor craves;  
..... Let trophies rain, but love is what I've sought,  
..... Or else, the sunshine, bright, that your love brought.

Thursday, September 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: envy,failure,lost love,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reyvrex Questor Reyes 06 October 2015

Thank you, Liza Sud Russia. A great delight to hear a comment from you. Have a nice day.

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 06 October 2015

Thank you Liza Sud Russia. It is a delight to be commented by you. Have a nice day.

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Liza Sudina 06 October 2015

Rex! it's a lovely poem with a happy end! Time pelted me with woes that I can't shake, To fill my cup to fullness ever since - very soothing effect!

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 03 September 2015

Thanks David Wood. It delights me no end hearing from you. Nice day to you.

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David Wood 03 September 2015

Delightful sonnet I enjoyed reading. Good ink.

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