Love Slap. Poem by dave lessard

Love Slap.

Rating: 5.0


I never asked for love,
but it slapped me in the face;
I would have gone on by,
content with my own pace.

But a slap, it wakes you up,
like a bolt out of the blue;
yesterday was loneliness,
but today...there's you.

I don't even know your name,
but you turned and smiled at me;
yesterday I had no one,
that offered love to see.

I can't ignore a subtle slap,
my demeanor turned to fluff;
I stuttered my hello,
would my shyness be enough?

You stopped and smiled again,
then asked me for the time;
I'd glanced down at my watch,
how bright her eyes did shine!

I said that it was time,
to let me buy her lunch;
to break ourselves away,
from the maddening crunch.

Then it was over coffee,
that I got slapped once more;
I said something that I shouldn't,
and she showed me the front door.

Monday, August 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorraine Colon 18 August 2016

Oh, how sad! We don't mind love's slaps, but when they come from the one we're hoping to win, that really hurts. Your poem made me laugh a bit because of its unexpected ending. I liked it.

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