Love's Tender Moment - (Haiku) Poem by Jim Norausky

Love's Tender Moment - (Haiku)

Rating: 4.9


Weeping willows sigh

lovers stroll around small pond

he kisses her hand.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dream Catcher 24 January 2009

Weeping Willows sigh....that's magic Jim....top 10..*dc*

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Vernon Eaker 25 January 2009

very nicely done. I personally do not understand Haiku's, I mean I know they are three lines 575 but to me most i read make no sense this was very good I can imagine that. I give you 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 25 January 2009

Good sense is applied and feelings have been brought well. May you read mine Cleopatra's glory

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Zaarah Jasmin 26 January 2009

so romantic! good piece... :)

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Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'He kisses her hand' Rachel Ann Butler

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'This stimulated my imagination and left me with a picturesque scene and I just love weeping willows so it has to have top marks! Karin Anderson

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Tsira Goge 04 March 2009

Fine landscape with graceful passages. It is very good, Jim.10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

a very nice haiku here Jim...loved it...10

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Sandra Fowler 30 January 2009

Timeless charm. You are a fine imagist. And thank you for liking my poem as well. Kindest regards, Sandra

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