Midnights Voice

Rookie - 858 Points (November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

Love's Magic


Time to put to test
Time for the ink in you
To flow past the gates...those
of Heavens and those of Hells
Around all the stars so there will
be plenty of ink to go around

It flows direct from your veins
Deep from within
From the pumps of sin
Dementia from past the stars
last gasp before super nova

But love...evol backwards
for evolution of constant change
will not be bound to rings or chains
for what is boundless must not stain
for what is magic cannot be hidden by hand

Submitted: Thursday, February 28, 2013
Edited: Friday, March 01, 2013

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  • Rookie - 206 Points Dee Corpolongo (5/28/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    Thomas, this here is a beautiful poem that mentions all of lifes magic like moons, and stars....
    and, , , , , love....oh how sweet it is~ when given freely and appreciated, it is truly magical. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 934 Points Unwritten Soul (3/30/2013 12:58:00 AM)

    Whatever, love never changed and will remain as a magical healer to any hearts and hope...for everybody from somebody_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aria Siren (3/5/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    Oh what a lovely piece. I especially enjoyed the second verse, but the entire poem is beautiful and inspiring. I love the visual of ink running through veins and also the line for what is boundless must not stain.
    Love seems almost a mix of magic and science as you depict it. Beautifully done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points Jahan Zeb (3/3/2013 2:22:00 AM)

    Loved this piece. The last stanza is so musical. the flow of the whole poem is superb and reaches the peak in the last stanza. the imagery is outstanding and words carry the message brilliantly.
    So nice a reading. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Titi Dale (3/2/2013 11:18:00 PM)

    Love is a beautiful thing, of which it's beauty does not even get close to matching this poem... Wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,003 Points Valsa George (3/2/2013 10:58:00 PM)

    Love flowing past the gates of heaven and hell and permeating every element is boundless whose magic cannot be hidden by any external screen! ! Great write with such heightened imagination! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (3/1/2013 5:36:00 AM)

    I love the concept and flow of this piece. It seems as beautifully painful as love itself... Tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,660 Points Diane Hine (3/1/2013 5:18:00 AM)

    I like the concept of all that inky sin pumping out of our veins and spilling around the stars- diabolically imaginative! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,442 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (3/1/2013 4:01:00 AM)

    a free poem that talks about the free love that can't be held tight in the name of ring and chain...the concept is very controversial to me..but people who are in this position can be motivated to start a new life in the name of love! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 934 Points Unwritten Soul (3/1/2013 3:06:00 AM)

    True, because even the love ones die the love remain healing the alive person who still keep it_Soul (Report) Reply

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