Love's Edict Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Love's Edict

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Every bosom has a depth for love, yet,
Not every bosom gets a share of it.
Every bosom yearns for love,
Yet, not every bosom responds to it.

Even when a dry leaf falls on a lake,
The water ripples.
When just a look of love is cast,
The bosom quivers.

Ripples are caused not by gravity,
But by a surface tension.
Quivers are caused not by a force,
But by an irresistible attraction.


Dhaka
25 February 2015
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Wednesday, February 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Many more edicts of love must be known to many others.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Clark 31 March 2015

Wow, this poem was meant for me to read today. I love it! I know exactly of which you speak. I get quivery all over when I talk to a certain person even on the phone and the same in person. When just a look of love is cast, the bosom quivers, says it all. Perfect!

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Khairul Ahsan 30 April 2020

@Patricia Clark, thanks for the appreciative comment. I am glad that you could relate to the poem and that makes me feel so inspired as a poet. Your comment made my day, though I am acknowledging it after more than five years- so belatedly! You haven't written a new poem here for a very long time. Hope you are alright? ?

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Roseann Shawiak 16 March 2015

Wow! A very profound poem, great imagery and subtle message. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Khairul Ahsan 30 April 2020

Thank you @Roseann Shawiak, for reading the poem and leaving some of your appreciative thoughts here. Much inspired.

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