Love (Romantic) Poem by Supriya Prathapan

Love (Romantic)

Rating: 5.0


It is a feeling which cannot be explained,
When your mind stops working and your heart is over-strained.
You are in a state of absolute delight,
And the face of your beloved always blurs your sight.
When poetry comes naturally,
And sleep eludes regularly,
When walking turns into prancing,
And you feel like singing and dancing.
When your beloved’s comfort and happiness becomes your obsession,
And your reason is repeatedly kicked by your passion.
Then ‘Love’ is the name of your condition,
For which there is only one prescribed medication:
'An equal love from your lover’s side',
This will calm your nerves and peace will reside.
Unrequited love is like severe body ache,
After all, the spurned lover’s heart is at stake.
His / Her eyes are water fountains,
He / She knows that true love can move mountains,
So he / she never stops trying,
Keeps heaving, hoping and crying.
But when love is reciprocated,
Every sentiment uttered for the beloved, seems exaggerated.
The thought of separation is unimaginable,
And feelings and sentiments become totally unmanageable.
The finest of all human sentiments,
‘Love’ knows no divisions, boundaries or impediments.
It spares no mortal soul,
In our lives, ‘Love’ plays an important role.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 14 August 2009

There is no one who is not drenched in rain and has not fallen in love. Falling in love and rising in love together is a blissful experience. It is presented pleasantly. Love happens naturally as rains pour, moon light cools, sunshine warms, flowers bloom, rivers flow, beloved's touch soothes, waterfalls dancing fall and like many natural phenomenon. Thanks for a lovely poem on love. Best wishes

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 August 2009

yea without love we cant live! Love is wonderful recourse! Nice wording! 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 14 August 2009

The sweetness of love lies in its 'give and take' character...sweet poem Supriya...well meant...well rhymed...10

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

Hey this again is very good.. every one goes through this phase I think.. nice indeed... very lovely to read.. and I like the manner in which express your self.. lovess shan

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Ted M 17 August 2009

When in Love little whispers, little things make a difference, as though one is under a spell.......The feelings associated are explained to the finest detail and in a nice smooth flow throughout.......... Nice write..........10

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2015

Feelings and sentiments with the muse of love. Nice work.

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lost in definition. clear thought, clear words. well written try reading my love poems.

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Simran Sanganeria 18 April 2010

lovely piece... your literature is very calm, r u into biology?

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 September 2009

yes, according to my dictionary love is an action verb and it cannot be shown without proofs!

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Preeti Chauhan 17 August 2009

wow...wish i had written it...great job friend

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